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Sunday, July 13, 2014


First of all this film has a fantastic cast! Bruce Willis, Liv Tyler, Michael Clark Duncan, Steve buscemi and of course F—king Ben Affleck! There are others mind you I just do not want to fill up the Entire first paragraph with names. This is one of the few films that can make this 40-year-old bachelor cry. The video that accompanies it does it to me even more so and the thus resulting soundtrack is out of this world. There are some great lines in this film as well. “Get off the Nuclear War Head” Is the only one I can think of off the top off my head. The film won awards in multiple Award Shows. The Oscars are over rated so I won’t mention them. This film won statues and plagues in the MTV Music Award Show, The Blockbuster Entertainment Award Show and even won Best Foreign Film in the Japanese Academy. This film is worth seeing multiple times. You don’t want to miss a thing or detail of this spectacular Michael Bay adventure. You will fell like you are living in an Abyss or on a sinking ship if you don’t add this movie to permannt library for multiple viewings. Grade A

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm