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Sunday, July 13, 2014


My reviews latley have been mostly centered on or around huge amazing casts. This film is no exception. Steve Martian and His real life Wife Mary Steenburgen are the parental influences in this film. Other cast members include Jason Robards, Dianne Wiest, Rick Moranis and even a young Keanu Reeves and an almost invisible Joaquin Phoenix. Ron Howard directed this family drama and after watching this two hour and four minute adventure. This film shows you beyond a shadow of doubt that your family is fairly normal. Yes, this is me writng this. The “surpise ending” is a bit confusing and the entire film runs slow and lacks stablilty. It is a film to take in however and can be enjoyed in multiple viewings with MOST every member of your clan. Grade B

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm