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Wednesday, December 25, 2013

A Christmas Story

I just wanted to come out and say. I loathe this film. It is on at my uncle’s every year on TBS starting on my birthday of Christmas Eve and ending on the morning of m Savior’s birth. Well I need a savior after watching this film in the backdrop every year for nearly three decades. I can criticize this horrid film with out basis. I promise not to call it “The worse piece of cinematic refuge ever forced upon the American viewing public!” I do however want to shoot my eye out after seeing this film over and over and over again. “Fudge!” is not he first word to come to find after ingesting this piece of garbage. For fudge is sweet and full of sugar. This movie is irrigating and full of sacrin. If I make fun of this film in front of Jill again I will not have a leg to stand on “Fragile” or otherwise. In case you have not noticed I am not fond this movie. I would rather stick my tongue to a flagpole on the North Pole and freeze to death then ever see this holiday treat again. Grade F

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm