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Wednesday, December 25, 2013

Arthur Christmas

This well written and very creative story tells the fable or legend of how Santa Clause gets around the world to deliver all those toys in just one night. Within this imaginative screenplay we see that even the Clause family has issues. The world also discovers that “like a trillion elves” are responsible for making the magic happen. If you sdesire more plot details simply see the movie. It is at your local Redbox for only $1.27. This film from the beginning is enjoyalble.The charaters are all solid and belivable the storyline unforgettable and danger the antagoist encounter is understandable. The only downside to this film is it has to end. If you are tired of 34 street driven miracles, kids who shot their eye out and cure at their mother and some poor sap wises he were never born than this is the Chritmas film to see this year. It is made in the modern day pixar like stlye of animation and the 21 century story line is to new to have even been twinkle in Saint ;s nichlous eye back when those other holiday film were wriiten. Se rent this Gmin your stocking today and enjoy a Chritmas film for the modrn day era of lap tops and cell phones. Grade A+

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm