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Wednesday, September 25, 2013

The Family

The first thing to grab your attention about this film is the cast. Robert Denero and Michelle Pfeiffer are a gangster husband and wife whom are once again being relocated to avoid capture. Tommy Lee Jones plays their agent and/ or case manager and he leads a cast of hoodlums seen in the pages or screenplays of films like Dick Tracy and others. Luc Benson directs this film and does a great job of doing so. In case you don’t recognize this name he has had his hand in both of the Taken films after scripting the first he has directed all the sequels. (One coming) He has also donned the director’s chair in The Fifth Element and The Professional. Don’t mistake this film for an action piece it is a comedy. There are several great scenes in it including a scene with a rain ridden Michelle Pfeiffer that may lead even female audience members into salivating. The story line is not terribly original but the elements of the film such as Ms. Pfeifeer looking hot as ever at age whatever and the afformentioned cast make this film worth seeing. Grade A

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Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

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Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm