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Thursday, September 26, 2013

Charmed: The Series

I dedicate this review to to lovley bartenders at my #1 sports bar. One bartender has a name in common with a character the other a key actress.) To tell the truth the only reason I go there is because it is just across the street from my pad! (Yes, a white man just wrote ‘Pad’!) That being said this is an epic series. I find the characters in this series as charming as the lovley ladies at Landmark! That being said let’s get on with the review. This show lasted eight epic seasons despite on e of the key characters leaving the show after the third season. (Sorry Shannen Noherty your loss) How do deal with the loss of a sister? I don’t honestly remember: but this show has fantastic writers. They managed to do it well. This magical series has everything a girl wants. (Guys too!) There are “White Lighters, warlocks, and demons Oh my!” There is no loin being told Leo, when I say this series is whimsical. The story lines remained constantly sold, the characters remained three deminsional through out. The cast was good looking for both sexes. Paige was a pretty as Leo was luscious. I have had a series hard on for Alyssa Milano since she was my “Boss” in her earlier series. (Sorry Tony!) She never needed magic to make me cum to the television screen. If you wake up early this show has back to back episodes on TNT at 7 and 8am (EST) Grade A

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm