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Wednesday, December 9, 2015

The Twilight Saga : Breaking Dawn Part 2

           Believe it or not this movie was actually very good. The soundtrack through was nauseating the acting by the two marquee actors of Kristen Stewart and Robert Pattinson was Better than expected. I mean what do you expect from those two. 

        The plot was incredibly well written (considering the source) and the pace was excellent. People complain about the pasty white faces of the actors and characters. For crying out loud they are vampires what do expect a Mexican with a suntan. The even address that issue in the beginning of the film. 

        The story came together like a well oiled machine. The direction was top notch. Oscar winning director Bill Condon did has proven himself in the past with films like Dreamgirls Gods and Monsters and even Part One in of the filmhe did well. He has added his ink to Kinsey and Chicago too. The ladder one got him an Oscar nomination. 

        As I said to my all male group of College age Bible brothers. “Skip Skyfall and See Twilight.” It is the far superior film. If you don’t belive me simply look down one posting. I only gave Skyfall a ‘C’! 

                                                                                                                                                                                                    Grade B

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm