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Tuesday, December 22, 2015

Supergirl (The TV Series)

First off, “What a cast!”! In this fairly new TV series (20 episodes) we have a great slew of faces! Calista Flockhart as Cat Grant. You also have Helen Slater and Dean Cain in smaller roles. They have either played Superman or “Girl” in the past. 
The writing is fantastic as well. This hour long episode engrossed me the entire length. I dared not even go to the bathroom during the commercials in fear I might miss something. Miss something I did not. 

I am now addicted to this show. I will be glued to my TV every time it is on. I’d tell you when it is on and what channel but I might have to pay some fee to someone for doing so. (Look it up on he Internet) 

Stay glued to the TV and work your schedule around seeing it. I have no schedule right now so it is not hard to miss. I got full nights sleep after viewing it and woke up satisfied. I suggest you put it on your Christmas list and keep watching it all year round! 


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Hi Matthew,

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Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm