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Tuesday, December 22, 2015


The first thing I liked about this movie was the cast. Cher was the headliner but the supporting cast was good as well. It starred Bob Hoskins, Wynona Rider and a pre Addams Family Christina Ricci. This movie came out one year before. 
I try not to give to much away of the plot in my reviews so I’ll simply say…
     “See this movie AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!”
         Although it took place a full decade before I was born I could still relate. The Kennedy Association is a key plot point in this film and that piece of trivia may give away my age. 
          This “old man” still enjoyed the film however. I was engrossed from the start and stayed glued to the TV until the end. My birthday is in 48 hours and this film may start off the fun! 

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm