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Wednesday, December 9, 2015

Radio (Again)

 This very well may be the most inspirational movie of all time. The plot will move you to be a better person. The movie is fantastic on every level. It moved almost instantaneously to my all time top ten list. 
The acting is superb. Ed Harris gives performance of his career but will be out shown by the majestic performance of Cuba Gooda Jr. you will be moved to tears by the acting of both these amazing actors. 

The plot moves along perfectly well and does not lull for a second. The script is exquisite. This is one of those movies you will want to go see again and again. Bottom line is go out and pay whatever you have to go see this movie. This is my first A+ is nearly four dozen reviews. 
                                                                                                                                                                                                Grade A+

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm