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Wednesday, December 9, 2015

Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix

This was one of the most entertaining Harry’s to date. The one in theaters (reviewed to my right was horrible.) This was the exact opposite it was heartfelt and genuinely fun.  As previously mentioned the book was 870 pages the movie was 2 hours ad 19 minutes. Despite being seen in multiple viewing I was able to keep up and entertained the entire time.

            The female villain or antagonist was wonderfully horrible, power hungry, and evil. She got her just deserts in the end. The plotline was excellent the pace consistent and the characters well drown out.

The acting was excellent as always and music was amazing.
Hedwig’s  Theme by John Williams (my favorite composer) was played consistently though out the film and a new patch of composers completed the excellent score.

The movie looked beautiful and majestic on my still somewhat new 24-inch screen. I was in awe the entire time and feel bad I didn’t have enough time in my busy schedule to see it all at once. In short I loved it.

                                                       Grade A 

P.S. Keep in mind I haven’t yet read the book but will soon. It is on my list. 

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm