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Thursday, December 10, 2015


      This movie can only come from the mind Of Steven King. It was scary, violent and weird. All are traits of the wonderful author. (My favorite by the way.) The Master of Horror had out done himself here with a story so scary I had to take a break from watching it. 

This Movie at two hours and Fourteen minutes was a tad too long. They could of cut it down by 15 to 30 minutes or so. My only other complaint is I was a little hard to Follow toll the end. Some times a tell tale sign of a good flick but not necessarily today. 

     The spotlight award goes to Damen Lewes steels the spotlight as Jonesey the multipersonal character. The rest of the acting was as ggod as can be expected. If this movie were a dream it would be a nightmare. It was a good nightmare though. I enjoyed it allthe way through. 

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm