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Saturday, March 21, 2015

Dawn of the Dead (2004)

Within this 101 minutes film there are shouts to many other horror films and their perspective genres. The first is in the opening scene. (See how many more you can spot.) Since this film it self is a remake of a 1978 classic one would expect nothing less. I will come out and say that I usually despise horror films. Alas, I was snowbound in from my non-paying job and my cay was not talking to me so I had nothing else to do but watch this film. I was SURPRISED. (Gomer Pyle) The film was captivating, exciting and even downright scary. There was suspense, good acting and even a followable plot. I must add this film to my most surprising pleaure list If I have one.) none the les this film is one to see. I Higly recommend it. GRADE A+

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm