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Tuesday, December 2, 2014

Dumb and Dumber

Dumb and dumber describes the people that would pay to see this movie. The plot is asinine and the cheap laughs are stupid. Whatever you do don’t go out and rent this poor excuse for a comedy. The script brings bathroom humor to a whole new low. One scene in particular is painfully stupid and makes you want to cry instead of laugh. Jim Carey is a great comedian his comedy genius was wasted on this script that should have been flushed down the toilet where it belongs. Jeff Daniels needs to make another movie to save his career from being flushed down the toilet. The same toilet I might add that the script should have been flushed down. The laughs in this movie are all cheap and pathetic. This movie isn’t worth wasting a valuable evening of your life seeing at any expense. So in short don’t waste your time or money on this pathetic excuse for a movie. It deserves no better that the lowest grade I can give it an F-. Grade F-

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm