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Monday, June 2, 2014

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This movie is really messed up. That is the plot line however. The confusion unfolds from four identical looking read plaid duffle bags it ends in a courtroom and has a fantastic bicycle lead chase scene down the streets of San Francisco (the best city for chases) in between. 

The acting is top notch. The humor fantastic and Madeline Kahn steels the show as the hen pecking fiancé named Eunice Burns in her introductory role.  The cast also includes Austin Pendleton (The Muppet Movie) and Sorrell Booke. (The Dukes of Hazard) 

The Bugs Bunny style title is appropriate because this movie is almost cartoon like in it’s insanity. The side spitting humor will be something you’ll remember long into the future. I personally loved it the 2nd time around. The end I remembered from my first viewing and looked forward to the entire one hour and thirty-nine minute duration of this film. 

This rare "G" rated film is fun for the whole family and will leave you in stitches for days to come. I personally liked it a lot but can’t quite give it my highest grade. So therefore it gets a… 

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm