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Tuesday, June 3, 2014

Dog With a Blog

This Disney Channel show features three children with a VERY big secret. Their dog can talk! He types too as well (along with using a mouse) The Jennings family isa party of five, the two clueless parents of course and then the three brillaint yet misguided children. The oldest is a dark haired boy named Tyler James, the Middle child is an adorable blonde hair little lady named Avery and the youngest is a curly hair named Titan named Cloe. Cloe is my favorie child. She steals the show with her deadpan humor and catches eyes with her adorable smile. The mother is wonderful of course and steal s the scenes she is in. Much like the mother from Good Luck Charlie she is a drama queen who needs a large suburban block to contain her ego. This show is fun for one and all. I am a forty year old bahlor who simply has too much time on his hands and watches the Disney Channel often. Grade A

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm