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Saturday, January 11, 2014

I Love You Beth Cooper

Ok, I admit this film to see the titular character naked! The towel drop scene on the Internet is overly popular and on my You Tube page way too much. While I ironic that I only saw a little ‘side tit’; remember the first sentence. What I got out of this film was heart. The story was familiar. The valedictorian was a geek who “knew everything”. His best friend was a nerd (possibly gay) who has scene every movie ever made and quotes films religiously. (I’m not that bad.) The film starts at graduation day where he declares his unspoken love for the head varsity cheerleader and pans everyone else. He leaves no stone unturned in this “tear down speech” and even denounces his best friend. The 102 minutes film takes place over the next few days and gives the lead character; (NOT Beth Cooper) the adventure of a lifetime! The film is fun; lighthearted ands should not be taken to seriously. I enjoyed it on a rainy, foggy, Friday night and so should you. Grade B (for Beth Cooper)

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm