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Thursday, November 28, 2013

Star Trek: Generations

This may be the perfect TV show to big screen feature. This big screen adaption not only manages to combine both captains from the current and past TV Show it also perfectly conveys morals of the aforementioned series. What am I talking about just read on and you will find out. Star Trek: The Next Generation was popular in the 90’s with a wide range of viewers. The one hour Sci- Fiction series was popular amongst both Christian audiences. (My Pastor loved it) as well as secular viewers. (So did my boss.) This make shift drama also scored points with Science nerds as well as Drama freaks. This 95 minute big screen adventure was a perfect blend of drama and action. Each and every character was well portrayed and the storyline was sound as well as exciting. William Shatner reprised his role as James T. Kirk and mixed punches with Patrick Stewart whom portrayed Jen Luc Picard on the more recent series. The new adventure of Enterprise –D gave new depth to several characters. Most notably it finally gave Brent Spiner's Data character the chance to feel the emotions he had longed the entire series to live up to his full potential. The Klingons were the recognized or established antagonist in this series and the banded together with Malcolm Mc Dowel to from a very menacing opponent. As I have said before how can you go wrong with the voice of Mc Dowell as a villain. I recommend this feature length adventure to all audiences especially those dedicated “Star Wars” lovers. (Hi Max.) Grade A

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm