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Thursday, July 11, 2013


Jodie Foster was excellent In the titular character role. She manages to portray feelings and emotions and show us a true and uterly real human being with out ever speaking much more than a speck of English. The cinmatagrpahy is brethtaking and the score fantastic in this wondefrul drama. When her mother dies, Nell is forced to fend for herself and discovered by small town doctor named Jerry Lovel. (Liam Neeson) and he hires the help of his real life wife Natasha Richardson. She is a state shrink that is pretty too. The two invirtandly move in together and make parent like figures to Nell. The story is touching and climatic. The pacing is perfect. The rest of the movie ain’t bad either. The antagonit(s) takes the form of a nosy press agent and a young horny delivery boy who discovreed the mothers body. There is a bit of nudity in this movie so you may not want the kids to see it right away. The scrpit is well written though and the acting is amazing espcially on the part of Miss. Foster who was robbed of an Oscar for her part in this film. I quess it is true what they say however it is a honor just to be nominated, NOT. Grade A+

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm