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Sunday, May 19, 2013

Star Trek Insurrection

How odd it works As any true Star Trek fan knows the odd numbered Star Trek films are always the disappointing ones while the even ones are always the more successful films. This may be the first Star Trek movie to break that mold. Rarely can you successfully combine drama, action, suspense and comedy into a Sci-Fi movie. The makers of Insurrection make it so. This movie goes where no Star Trek Film has gone before. It gives all seven characters their own development without taking away from the overall plot. Data learns to play, Worf experiences Klingon puberty, Geordi gets to see, Troi and Riker get romantic and Jean-Luc falls in love. There is also an interesting plot twist that you will never guess. Grade A-

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,


Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!


We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.


There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.


I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.


Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!


Talk to you soon!


Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)


1. Hayden Christensen


2. Tom Crusie


3. Kevin Costner


4. Keeanu Reeves


5. Denise Richards


6. Adam Sandler


7. Arnold Schwarzenegger


8. William Shatner


9. Sylvester Stalloan


10. John Claude Van dahm