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Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Lakeview Terrace

This is a captivating pulse beating drama that doesn’t give up. Oh wait it does, for the entire 35 minutes in the middle. It does however manage to build tension that entire time. The beginning starts of rather simply and seems to build to what can only be described as a clique filled predictable ending. Just one tiny problem the climax is neither simple nor foreseeable. The mile a minute finale can not be described in mere words it must be seen to enjoy. When is seen this fiaalle is It is captivating and adrenaline pumping. Worthy of knocking up my letter grade an entire level. The acting is well done and appropriate for the given genre. It is after all an action flick. It will not receive any Oscars nor will it even be nominated. As in such it shouldn’t be messed with. It is wonderful as it is and as you many know why mess with a sure thing. A sure thing it is. There are 5 holds at the source on the two DVD’s I attained this movie from. That source is the Radnor Library. Make note my friend that at this Delaware County Library (unlike the Chester County library only a mile away) the movies are free. Free is always good when you have no car and walk to two jobs. This review is also free it costs you no money to read. The best things in life are free like friends, families and discovering new fans amongst those sources. Like I did tonight. Hi Josh. Grade B-

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm