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Monday, April 22, 2013

What Happens In Vegas

A laugh out loud funny movie that is neither plausible or predictable. I didn’t know from the previews if they were gonna learn to love or grow to loathe each other by the end of the movie. I was looking forward to either ending. It is after all a comedy. Weather or not it’s a romantic comedy or not is left to be determined. (By the previews that is.) What Happens in Vegas boasts a wonderful supporting cast, Including Treat Williams, Dennis Miller, Lake Bell, Queen Latifah and Dennis Farina. They all are perfectly cast in their perspective rolls. They are an amazing ensemble cast. Ashton Kutcher and Cameron Diaz play the leading rolls wonderfully. They are funny, sexy, and play off each other well. Their attempts to spend most of the movie torturing each other into divorce are hysterical. The double entendres roll at times at a mile a minute and seem to grow more and more creative as they go. I will not reveal the ending. As I said before I was looking forward to either scenario. This is move that must been scene to truly appreciate it., It can not simply be described in a flimsy review like I’m writing now. It should be enjoyed with a large audience as opposed to the one couple I saw in the the theater with today. This movie is a perfect movie to take your mother to on Mothers Day. She will love you that much more for your fine selection in movies. Grade B+

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm