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Saturday, February 4, 2017

Shrek the Third

       This is one of those movies that will make you laugh out loud. It is a cute and friendly trek into the land of far far away. Shrek the third id by far not the best of the series. Nevertheless it is the most entertaining family movie in a long time.

         Shrek is  fun and funny. You will laugh throughout. You will be pleased by all the familiar characters from the fairy tails and family movies you grew up with your entire life. Donkey is back for a few more chuckles. This without a doubt is the most fun you’ll have at the theaters all summer.
        Shrek is a must see on the big screen. See it with a crowd and see it today. You will surely enjoy it. This movie should most definitly be nominated for best animated movie of the year. It is definitly worth the price of admisssion and without a doubt entertaining for the whole family.

                                                                   Grade  B


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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm