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Saturday, February 4, 2017


         This movie is heartwarming and original. This is a film that is different. This is a film that you will take your friends to see often.
You will enjoy Pleasantville once you see the whole picture. It is a movie that will change the way you look at life. You will take a new understanding about the world you live in.  The typical moviegoer will not take always see what the intelligent moviegoer will.  You being intelligent will walk away from this movie with a new world of understanding.

     This movie is acted with beauty and grace.  This is a film that is well put together. It is a film with a pleasant soundtrack. This is a movie you will want to see often. The direction is excellent. Pleasantville is one of those rare movies you will want to see repeatedly.  Go rent this film today (or even buy it) you well enjoy it every time and want to see it.                                                                                                                                                                         

 Grade A+

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm