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Saturday, December 31, 2016

Moana


Disney is the queen of princess movies. The Little Mermaid brought them back out of mothballs in 1989. This one had some class. There where many unique characters in this film. One of those described characters was a large man with many dancing tattoos. Dwayne Johnson plays or voices the Indian (Native American) chief I just described with many dancing tattoos each one unique. 
In live action films multiple directors is NOT A GOOD IDEA. In animated films it works however. I will admit however that I have NO IDEA how you direct an animated film. Keep in mind I have written over 1,000 movie reviews. I took a movie watching class on a college campus. Also, I had a column writing movie reviews while I was a Journalism Major in college not to mention a former friend of mine works for I.L.M. (The Star Wars studio) That being said I am clueless as to how you direct an animated film.

This is an enjoyable 107 minutes however. My sister nephew and I enjoyed this film VERY MUCH! I recommend taking your entire family to see it as soon as possible.


Grade A+

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,


Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!


We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.


There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.


I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.


Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!


Talk to you soon!


Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)


1. Hayden Christensen


2. Tom Crusie


3. Kevin Costner


4. Keeanu Reeves


5. Denise Richards


6. Adam Sandler


7. Arnold Schwarzenegger


8. William Shatner


9. Sylvester Stalloan


10. John Claude Van dahm