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Sunday, September 11, 2016

Sabrina


         First off, let’s start off with the positive. This film had a great cast. I am a HUGH Star Wars and Indiana Jones fan therefore a big cast of Harrison Ford. (My sister has a crush on him.) Greg Kinnear is not bad either. Julia Ormond is a great Actress as well.

         Now, let’s get to the complaints, at 2 hours and 7 minutes, this film simply dragged on. I actually did go to bed in the middle of this film. I truly did go to bed in the middle of this film.

         Overall, I did not enjoy this movie. I was never truly engaged. For the most part I was bored and the plot lacked any energy at all whatsoever. Do not add this film to your Netflix queue, or watch it on “free” pay per view. In long (as this film was) simply ignore this movie all together.


Grade D

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,


Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!


We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.


There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.


I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.


Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!


Talk to you soon!


Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)


1. Hayden Christensen


2. Tom Crusie


3. Kevin Costner


4. Keeanu Reeves


5. Denise Richards


6. Adam Sandler


7. Arnold Schwarzenegger


8. William Shatner


9. Sylvester Stalloan


10. John Claude Van dahm