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Tuesday, September 6, 2016

i am Sam

      This movie is two hours and thirteen minutes of major intensity. The acting was top notch. The writing was superior and the drama was full of edge of your seat excitement. I watch movies almost every day and I had to take a few breaks from this riveting film.

         The spotlight award goes undeniable to Sean Penn who was Oscar nominated for his role. Several other awards were given to this movie to including an acting award to Dakota Fanning for her role in this amazing film. The film was nominated for and won several other awards for it's sound and it's soundtrack alike. That soundtrack was an eclectic mix of 60's and 90's music alike.

     This is one film I highly recommend to any one who is interested in a really good flick. It will make you think and cry as well as cheer for this indescribable feature film. I loved it from start to finish and my even add it to my permanent collection.

Grade A+

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm