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Wednesday, September 7, 2016


         This made for TV (Disney Channel) has got some potential at 1 Hour and 52 Minutes in length it runs a bit long but also tells a complete story. Thee offspring of Cruella Devill, Maleficent, and Jafar are all present and accounted for in this film.
          They team up to take down the enemies of their parents whom most kids know as the heroes of their favorite and beloved Disney animated classics.
         This film had potential and at times is even fun. The villains where backwards “A’s” as if stolen from an Oakland baseball uniform. One had purple hair and they all have a mean disputation.
         It was my day off and I needed to be entertained for 1 hour and 52 minutes. I was! This film is fun and entertaining and on this rainy Monday it was worth the “free rental”.

         If you have kids of your own or even if you are are a bachelor like me this film is worth viewing. I found if for free on the Disney Channel and I am sure you won’t be disappointed when you watch it with whom ever you chose to share it with.

Grade D (for Disney and Descendents)

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Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

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(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

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