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Friday, January 15, 2016

Toy Story 3

            This movie is one of the most creative and entertaining movies I have ever scene. Keep in mind if had this blog spot for two and a half years and am on my way to 600 reviews by the end of next month. No movie I’ve reviewed however was this creative.

The best of the best characters all returned for one last feature film. They (the characters) even mentioned the fallen beloved characters by name and paid them homage in this fantastic film. The movie was 103 minutes long and there were also previews (in 3D) and I little 6 minutes Pixar 3D film before the movie that also rocked the house. All in all you will spend approximately two hours in the theaters of fun 3D fun.

This is definitely a movie I will recommend to family and friends. In fact I already did. This is the most ingenious movie I have seen in theaters all year and one of the most fun as well. Go see it as soon as possible. 

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm