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Thursday, January 7, 2016

Seems Like Old Times

         What I can you about this film it has a great cast. Goldie Hawn leads a crew of all stars including Chevy Chase portrayed her first husband Charles Grodin portrayed her current husband and Robert Gulliaume (Benson) played the part of her butler. Oh yea Harold Gould was the judge of the case at the center of the plot. 

      Are you confused now?  You should be. This movie confused me and I saw it. What was it about, who were the protagonist and antagonist? I can tell you however it was funny. I was entertained for 100 minutes. 

        This film is free on On Demand. If you have Comcast (and who doesn’t) you know what I mean.  I’d recommend this film to anyone. Warning however you many need a scorecard to figure out who’s who.

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm