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Thursday, December 31, 2015

The Time Travelers Wife

I have been an admirer of Eric Bana for some time now. He has kissed some of the most beautiful women in Hollywood, including, Natalie Portman, Drew Barrymore and Scarlet Johansen. In this outing he adds Rachael Mc Adams to the work, not a bad days work for 7 figures.  This is his most romantic outing to date. It is sort of like Quantum Leap meats An Officer and A Gentleman. 

The time traveling concept adds just enough Sci FI feel to keep the men like me glued. The ladies will be attracted by both Mr. Bana and the romantic feel of the film none will go home disappointed. While I admit I have not read the book I herd from other reviews that it keeps true to form. I am sure it is not as good, but it supposedly doesn’t ruin the book either. 

This is one film everyone will enjoy. Don’t go see it alone like I did but take a friend of the opposite sex. They may be more than your friend by the end of this epic romance. 

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm