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Monday, December 28, 2015


It is only appropriate that my first review of the week after joining The 700 Club is about a Christian school. It is also appropriate that this film is so perfect. Perfectly divine that is. This movie is an amazing mix of comedy and genius. It boasts a great cast and a wonderful script. I lived it from start to finish. 

While the aforementioned cast is lead by the often dark Jenna Malone, it is Mandy Moore who steals the show. It is her and her alone that get the spotlight award for this wonderful film. The rest of the cast is genuine as well. It includes, Macaulay Culkin, Martin Donavan, and Eva Amurri. 

       I watch this movie on a Sunday morning before going to church and laugh out loud hysterically at the absurdity of it all. This movie should be shown in churches everywhere so we (Christians) can all learn to laugh at our selves a little more. It is intelligently written and perfectly acted. I may even rent it again. 

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm