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Monday, December 21, 2015

Runaway Jury

Cast: The Antagonist is Gene Hackman (Superman) whom play a lawyer. (Class Action) need I say more?

The Protagonist is  Dustin Hoffman (Rain Man) he plays his opposing counsel. (Kramer Vs Kramer.) I am thinking so far so good. 

The central character is played by John Cusack. He will Say Anything to get on the jury and sway it his way. 

The Female Lead is the adorable Rachel Weisz. All I have to say to that I Want You to be Going all the way with me before The Mummy Returns. 

Grade A+

The plot: It is about manipulation and surprise. I can not imagine any courtroom drama  more supreme than that. You will be guessing up until the end and still have you jaw on the floor by the end of the two hour and two minute drama.

Grade A+

The Author:  John Gresham. What paper back writer is a better author of court room dramas than he. 

Grade A+

Overall Grade: Do I really need to type it. How apropos Tripe A’s for a beautiful young lady whom dives all the way from New Jersey. 

Grade A (Or should I say AAA) 

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm