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Wednesday, December 9, 2015

Jersey Girl

This may be one of the greatest love stories ever told. The story told here is about a love that will never end, the truest of true loves a love that can never die. It is not a typical love story between a man and a woman. Instead it is a love story between a father and his daughter. 

This is a family movie for one and all. This is a great date movie or even a movie for those that have been married for awhile. This is the ultimate chick flick. This is great movie to take your male friends to see. This is even a movie you may want to see alone. This is a fun movie, an enjoyable movie, and a pure delight all rolled into one. 

I went in expecting a typical love story between and man and a woman. I came out with a totally uplifted spirit that makes me jealous that I am not a father. I envy those who have the pure joy of raising a child and have a newfound respect for single parents. (Especially single fathers) 

This is definitely a movie that you will recommend to one and all. This is a simple fun loving movie that all will enjoy for years to come. 

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm