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Tuesday, December 15, 2015


            This movie has a fantastic 80’s cast. Ted Knight, Chevy Chase and Bill Murray who could ask for more? Oh yea did I mention Rodney Dangerfield. This movie is funny from the start. The wild Mr. Dangerfield, The insane Bill Murray and the Fletch like Chevy. If there were an Oscar for perfect casting this movie would take the cake. (or should I say hole?)

            The plot is fairy simple the typical week in the life of a pro golf coarse and it’s caddies. The stubborn destructive gofer, the rich males engage in a pissing match and the caddy that has it all, sex appeal, charm and a promising future.

            The antics in this movie are far from par. This film is one hour and thirty-nine minutes of pure fun. If you don’t laugh at this movie you ought to have your head examined. This may well be the funniest golf movie ever made. There isn’t much competition though.

                                                                                        Grade B+

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm