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Monday, December 14, 2015


From A man who has 3 different colleges under his belt. This movie was well accepted. Now keep in mind at one of those colleges I took simply one movie watching class and at the third and final and most admirable college I had a movie review column in the school newspaper.

            Justin Long leads a young cast good-looking males and females. Blake Lively is perhaps the best looking member of this cast and stands out for MANY reasons other than her looks. Maria Thayer is the token redhead and also does more than simply look good in the cast.
            This movie maintains it’s pace for the entire 93-minute length of the film. It is appropriate that I graduated from high school in ’93 because this movie is about learning. (Ok, So I graduated in 1992. Perhaps I could have gone directly to South Harmon Institute of Technology.

(Grade A for Accepted)

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm