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Saturday, November 28, 2015

Meet The Robinsons

A 12 year old prodigy is still livig in in an orphanage at the start of this movie. He has ben rejected by 124 prospective parents and is slowly growing tired of being turned down. He Invents a machine that will read your mind in a hope of getting a glimpse of his birth mother. He is whisked a way by 13 year old who takes into the future to help preserve his past.

Disney magic is short of spectacular in this outing. While the movie is cute warm hearted and entertaining. It fails to muster up a winning film. There are a few surprises in this movie which you won’t see coming. The plot line is enough to get by but is not quite stupendous.  

Meet The Robinsons may be enjoyed by the kids but it won’t entertain the adults like Disney’s  Pixar films manage to do. the Characters including a chorus of singing frogs are enjoyable but nothing to write home about.                                                  

                                                                                                                                                   Grade C+

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm