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Thursday, December 4, 2014

( A Trailer Review)

Star Wars: The Force Awakens ( A Trailer Review) First off it is only a teaser trailer. The movie is a far cry from being finished. There is already controversy because the storm trooper seen in the opening is black. This is stupid for TWO reasons. First of all it is a form of reverse prejugice and secondly perhaps it is a shout the man whom voices Darth Vader and was the concept behind the original storm trooper. Let’s focus on the positive, now shall we. I LOVE the Sith ligtsaber flashed in the trailer. I also think the Millennium Falcon scene few seconds later is awesome too. It is by far one of the best spaceships in cinema and I love the concept of bringing it back in the new series. Grade ? (Let us see more soon)

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm