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Monday, July 14, 2014

The Santa Clause 2

Rarely do you find a movie that makes you feel good all over. How often do you find a movie that is entertaining and wholesome fun for the whole family? It is a rare exception where you find a movie that you simply do not want to end. You seem to look forever before you find a movie that has, adventure, suspense, comedy, romance, great special effects, and no violence or cursing. This is one of those movies. It is in a word wonderful. In this secularized post 9/11 world that we live in it is hard to find something that makes you believe in the goodness of the human soul. This movie will fulfill that belief. This is another rare live action movie that is rated G. There is nothing in this movie that will offend anyone. If you are offended by anything in this movie I suggest you check your chest and see if you still have a heart. For my heart was beating throughout this movie it was beating with excitement and love. I recommend telling everyone you know to go see this wonderful film it is simply amazing. Tell your friends, family, co-workers and enemies (you may not have any enemies anymore if you suggest his film to them) alike this film is fun, fun, fun. I will definitely see this movie again and again. In case you haven’t gotten the point already this film gets a 10; four stars a perfect score. Grade A+

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm