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Wednesday, June 18, 2014

Now Pronounce You Chuck And Larry

This is a cute lighthearted comedy about the difference between right and wrong. It’s about two very straight men pretending to be gay for the sake of benefits. Chuck Levine (Adam Sandler) and Larry Valentine (Kevin James) are best friends and partners in a New York City Fire Department. They form a bond during this movie that can not be severed. Jessica Biel, Dan Akroyd and Ving Raimes are among this stellar supporting cast. They play there parts perfectly and seem comfortable in their roles. The script is well written and simply fun. You will enjoy this comic ride down the street of moral avenue. While this movie is completely forgettable it is one that will stick in your craw for a long time to come. You will laugh you will chuckle you may even smile. You will not however walk away disappointed. Grade C+

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm