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Tuesday, April 1, 2014

The Last Mimzy

The Last Mimzy is a childhood adventure fantasy story. Mimzy is a vessel from the future sent in the past to save every man woman and child on Earth. Another Sci-Fi Movie that shows up technology cannot replace the true human soul. While I can't name any examples it always seems that an innocent young mind is the only possibility of saving the future. Noah and Lindsey Wider are two siblings who find a strange new toy on the beach. when that toys starts showing supernatural powers people star asking questions. All hell brakes loose and every body is suspicious. The little girl Emma (Rhiannon Leigh Wryn) debuts in her first leading role and outshines the rest of the cast. She is charming and beautiful. She is plays the childhood prodigy perfectly and surely has a strong future ahead of her. The Rest of the cast is a bunch of unrecognizable actors who may never get chance in the world of Hollywood. This movie may just be suited for young girls and their parents. There is very little appeal to any male demographic and is definitely aimed at a small target audience. The small target audience my enjoy this unique adventure but I did not. I was amused and fascinated but simply thought the plot dragged on too long and had no basis in reality. Oh Well though i guess it’s only a movie. Grade B-

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm