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Thursday, March 13, 2014

Two Short Summeries

The Lorax (PG) 95 Minutes Danny Devito, Zac Efron This film was released on Dr. Seuss' 107 birthday. It contains a creative story line a good moral for children of all ages. Despite the fact that Mr. Theodor Geisel (Dr. Seuss) has written nearly 50 children's books, 46 but who's counting, and had had many of those popular titles come to life on the big (movies) or small (TV) screen. This is his first children tale to be released in the 3D animated format. See it today with the whole family you will be sing and dancing at the end of the film. This Means War PG-13 Action /Adventure 120 m Chris Pine, Reese Witherspoon, and Tom Hardy This action adventure flick resembles the Spy VS Spy reoccurring strip from Mad Magazine. This buddy cop style film pits two CIA partners against one anther, both with itchy trigger fingers over the love of one beautiful blonde. And who is to blame them most men will fall to pieces for Reese. These one-time partners can Hardly wait to Pine over Witherspoon. She is sweeter than candy that does not come in two mini portions or a little orange bag.

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm