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Tuesday, December 10, 2013

Charlie Wilson’s War

Tom Hanks is as always amazing. Philip Seymore Hoffman was good too. This movie was nothing less than spectacular. It Moved at an even pace and kept you interested in the entire plot. I didn’t look at my watch once. Charlie Wilson’s War is political thriller. You really need to anictipate an even paced dram that doesn’t have much action if any at all. This is definitely a movie that already has been nominated for a few Golden Globes and should definitely be nominated for some oscars as well. It may or may not be Best Picture Caliber it depends on what else is nominated this year. Julia Robert's has a small supporting role in this movie but definitely is an important role. Her Token red locks are dyed blonde in this picture and she is still a sight for sore eyes. She surely is a Pretty Woman. This movie should definitley satisfy all those that are looking for a good New Year’s Flick. GRADE A-

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm