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Monday, December 9, 2013

Batman Begins

This tale is morbid ths tale is dark. This tale is violent this tale is dark. This tale is intense this tale is dark. Got it this tale is dark. This is not a movie for the young or the young at heart. This is not a movie for the faint of heart. This is a movie that is nothing less than dark and violent. This movie is rated PG 13 for a reason a very good reason it is not intended for those children under the age of 13. This is not a fun for the whole family movie I wouldn’t recommend the movie for anyone in the family at all. It is a dark and violent movie the should not be seen at all much less by a family. The Only Gem in this movie is the amazing acting of the main characters. Christian Bale is well played as the dark night perhaps the best dark night since Michael Keaton. The supporting cast is well played to. To sum up this is a dark violent movie that should best be left alone much less scene. This movie was not worthy of a public screening. This is simply one of those movies best left for the dumpster. Grade D-


Debraj Bhattacharjee said...


Debraj Bhattacharjee said...

A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm