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Sunday, November 17, 2013

King Arthur

In a word, ZZZZZ. I knew right away when I looked at the length of This film at two hours and 18 minutes that it would be a long one. I didn’t think it be over two hours of boring. I should have known the director’s cut would be a tad long shall we say. I look at it this way I got caught up on my sleep real quick. Even a quicky sex scene with the sumptuous Kierra Knightly wasn’t enough to save this mind nummer of a film from the doldrums of sleepiness. There were a few cool scenes in this one like the ice cracking battle scene was kick ass. Over all the film did nothing else other than put me to sleep over and over again. In short this film was anything but. It was two hours and 18 minutes of boring and did not contain enough excitement to fill a pill container. My grade is an F because this film simply failed to entertain me. Grade F.

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm