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Thursday, September 5, 2013

Where The Wild Things Are

This Is a creative wild romp through The imagination of one little boy. How much of it is reality how much of it is imagined? The question you must ask yourself is how much of it is good. That is the question this review is here to answer. Let’s start with the creativity factor. It is one of the most creative books I ever read as a child and I was hooked with only 48 pages. I could read this book again and again in fact my school library at Loomis Elementary was decked out to resemble this book. It was the most requested, most checked out, book of all time (at least for the time I went there) Grade A+ Next we will move onto pacing . It was well paced and excellently timed. There were boring times and faster times but they flowed together like warm apple cider on a cool Autumn day. It was a cool Autumn day that I got to see this film I was alone in the theater much like the main character was alone in the world. Grade A+ Finaly we will finish up with the age-old watchable factor. It was completely watchable. Well acted, with beautiful cinematography and majestic scenery. This is an all good film, fun for the whole family. This is a must see and a treat for the eyes. Don’t miss it on the big screen today see it with some one you love or someone who is young at heart. You get bonus points if it is the same person. Grade A+

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

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(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm