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Saturday, September 14, 2013

Live and Let Die

Live and Let Die Mad Libs Style This is Roger Moore’s first outing is agent 007. It is one of his better ones too. This is also the first majorly black cast as well as first black antogonist for 007 to face. This is Jane Seymour’s big screen debut as well. The theme song by Paul McCartney is an instant hit and it is played though out the film. (It is even played one briefly in the next film.) This is one of the better Moore outings. The acting is well done the plot is believable and the pace is well done as well. This is amongst my top ten favorite chase scenes and thus said chase sequence was even spoofed by Duracell well into the 80’s. (It came out in ’73) This is one all die had action fans will enjoy. It is fun, action packed, and will keep you riveted till the end. Go out and rent it to day. I know I enjoyed it. Grade A-

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm