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Saturday, May 4, 2013

Adam

This was a compelling and interesting drama. It was educational and interesting as a film. It was well acted and well portrayed for sure. I felt I learned a lot about Asperger’s and I a better person for watching this movie. Ok so I laid it on a little thick in that opening paragraph but seriously this film was good. It wasn’t the best film I’ve ever seen in my lifetime It wasn’t the worst either. It kept me entertained for one hour and thirty-five minutes and was intriguing to watch nonetheless. This is definitely a film I will watch again and attempt to get something out of the second time around. As for now however I put it back in the mails box and sent it back to Netflix. I will see it agin in the future ans assertain how true to life it really is when it comes to life with love. Grade B+

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,


Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!


We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.


There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.


I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.


Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!


Talk to you soon!


Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)


1. Hayden Christensen


2. Tom Crusie


3. Kevin Costner


4. Keeanu Reeves


5. Denise Richards


6. Adam Sandler


7. Arnold Schwarzenegger


8. William Shatner


9. Sylvester Stalloan


10. John Claude Van dahm