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Sunday, April 28, 2013

Catch Me If You Can

It seems like Spielberg can’t make a movie any more without Tom Hanks. 1st there was that unheard of unawarded movie about some private named Ryan and that movie was directed by Spielberg and Starred Tom Hanks. This Year however we have TWO movies combining the talents of such household names as Hanks and Spielberg. The Road to Perdition and now Catch Me If You Can. Both great movies that I foresee making noise in March. Christopher Walken should be nominated for a supporting actor Nod. John Williams may add another gold statue to his collection for his brilliant score. Although it may be tough since He’ll be competing against himself with Perdition also getting nominated. Leo should also get nominated for his breathtaking performance in this film. This is a must see film that the whole family can relate to sand enjoy. Grade A-

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm