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Sunday, March 3, 2013


It took my roughly five times renting this film form the Redbox to actually view this film. I was never a fan of Ridley Scott or James Cameron’s or his style of visual arts films. I prefer a plot line and a decent story not water coming to life and smiling at you or Russell crow being grunt (no acting required!) I never liked Sigourney Weaver and found her to be the most annoying part of the best comedy ever made (Ghostbusters). As a result I am not Alien(s) fan so therefore had a reason for returning this film. Nevertheless I watched this movie and attempted to wake out of the slumber of another sleepless night. Let’s see there are a bunch of idiots on a foreign turf or Alien world. They explore the planet in space suits. Disobey orders to “keep masks on” one guys is a slime ball. The hottest man and women aboard are both blondes with blue eyes. Oh yea the slime ball bangs the hot blonde non human robot and impregnates her with an Alien baby. Why Am I not surprised. This film should be left in orbit and launched to Mars. For we know Mars exits as per the plot of this film not so much. Grade F

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A note from an editor!

Hi Matthew,

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this piece, especially on a Saturday morning. I can tell you definitely took good notes of everything that was going on during the event!

We still have some work to do before this piece is ready to print. Your piece has a lot of information, but it doesn’t sound like a news article. What was the point of his speech/presentation? Why was he addressing this audience? What is Vanguard? What does the company do – who does it serve? You spend a lot of time narrating (for example, how he was injured), but did not report on the purpose of the event. You can maybe mention his appearance/joking about it in a sentence or two, but do not take several paragraphs to do so. Also, I like how you mentioned where the name “Vanguard” comes from.

There are a lot of spelling errors in this piece – make sure you proof read each sentence carefully.

I know I am getting back to you a little later I hoped, and I’m sorry about that! But if you have time tonight, please go through my suggestions and try to rework your piece. You can send me what you have tonight/tomorrow morning. Please bring a copy of it to the meeting tomorrow and we will discuss it further from there.

Once again, thanks for your hard work and promptness! Remember this is a learning process, and we are all part of the Waltonian team!

Talk to you soon!

Ten Most pathetic movie stars that still have careers.

(In A - B -C Order)

1. Hayden Christensen

2. Tom Crusie

3. Kevin Costner

4. Keeanu Reeves

5. Denise Richards

6. Adam Sandler

7. Arnold Schwarzenegger

8. William Shatner

9. Sylvester Stalloan

10. John Claude Van dahm